‘Alpha Girl’ by Kate Bloomfield – Review + Excerpt

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Welcome to my review of Alpha Girl! You can also find an excerpt of Chapter 8 below!

 

 

 

 

 

 

Alpha Girl (Wolfling Saga Book #1) by Kate Bloomfield

New Adult/Paranormal Romance

**not intended for audiences younger than 15 years of age, as it contains scenes of a sexual nature, and coarse language.**

Organised by: Girls Heart Book Tours

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Book Description:

Seventeen year old Rose Goldman is highly unpopular in the little town of Halfway. Ever since the ‘attack’ when she was a girl, people and animals have been afraid of her. She gets bullied in school, and called ‘wet dog’ because of the way she smells, despite being extremely hygienic. However, life takes a turn when a new teacher starts at Halfway High. Mr. Stone, the quirky and charismatic English teacher is twice Rose’s age, but she feels an unexplainable pull towards him from day one. Despite her better judgement, Rose pursues a friendship with Mr. Stone, who seems unable to stay away from her.

What is pulling this unlikely pair together?

My Review:

My Rating: 4/5

When a character awkwardly introduces herself at the beginning of the book, you instantly judge it and assume that it’s going to be not as well written as you hoped. But I was pleasantly surprised when Alpha Girl turned out to be a book that I couldn’t put down!

I’ve read a few books where there is a student/teacher romantic relationship going on, but Alpha Girl was one with a twist. They were both werewolves.

At first, neither student or teacher knew that the other was a werewolf that would change on every full moon. But then secrets were revealed and things moved along quickly.

As a character, I wasn’t so hot on Rose. First impression, she thought the world revolved around her, she was the only werewolf, she didn’t have any friends, everyone hated her, the world was out to get her…ect ect. It seemed like the author was trying to give Rose a hard time intentionally, laying all this stuff on her, being a werewolf, loving her teacher, having family problems at home…it’s a lot to take in for one character.

Towards the end, Rose did display a certain maturity that wasn’t there for the first part of the book. So, she did improve, thankfully 🙂

Blooms writing totally sucked me in! It didn’t take me long to read either, I read half of it in one sitting! (And I’m not a super-fast reader.)

Overall, in some parts Rose acted liked a spoilt teenager, but generally Alpha Girl was great, steamy romance was some super-natural thrown in for good measure too!

About Author and LINKS:

bloomfieldBlog | Twitter | Facebook | Wattpad | Goodreads| Amazon

Best-selling and independent Australian author, Kate Bloomfield, has successfully made a name for herself in the world of self-publishing at just twenty-three years old. Her newest and most precious book yet, Alpha Girl, is a controversial Paranormal Romance between a student and teacher.  A book not for those easily offended.

Kate was born in Enfield, London in 1989, but has lived in Wollongong, Australia for most of her life.

Now working full time as an independent author, Kate has published four novels, and two short stories.

Her fifth novel ‘Alpha Girl’ is a paranormal romance that explores a complicated a student/teacher relationship. It is due for release on April 1st 2013.

 

 EXCERPT:

Mr. Stone’s smile faltered. ‘I like my women to have a mind of their own – to be witty. Like you.’

My throat closed up. Like me?

‘You’re an amazing girl,’ he said suddenly.

His use of the word girl made my stomach twist painfully.

‘Am I?’ I asked.

‘Of course.’

‘A girl?’

He smiled knowingly. ‘An amazing woman,’ he corrected himself.

‘No one has ever told me that before,’ I said.

‘I don’t believe that,’ he smiled. ‘You’re clever, and beautiful, and damn witty.’

Mr. Stone’s jaw tensed as he realized what he was saying.

‘Beautiful?’ I asked, the word escaping as nothing more than a whisper.

‘Don’t you know?’ he asked.

My heart thundered as I stared at him. Oh please, my mind begged. Please tell me what is going on in that head of yours.

‘D-don’t I know what?’ I asked.

‘Don’t you know what you’re doing to me?’ He said as though I was torturing him.

‘What?’ My skin stung and my head swam with the possibilities.

‘Rose, I-’ He paused to collect his thoughts. ‘I’ve felt this … this pull towards you since day one. I can’t explain it.’

He didn’t need to explain it, because I felt it too. His eyes, his smile and his scent had me drawn in.

I placed a shaking hand over his, which was still on the steering wheel. He looked at our hands for a moment before allowing me to thread my fingers through his. I could feel his pulse in between each of my fingers.

Mr. Stone inhaled deeply. ‘Christ,’ he muttered, shutting his eyes tightly.

‘What’s the matter?’ I breathed.

‘That … that scent. The way you smell-’

I suddenly became very self-conscious. Bullies at school often accused me of smelling like wet dog. I

sniffed my shirt, but I smelled perfectly normal.

‘What is it?’ I said defensively. ‘I showered this morning-’

Mr. Stone laughed, and I felt my cheeks burn with embarrassment.

‘No,’ he said with a small smile. ‘You smell amazing.’

‘I do?’

‘Absolutely. You always do.’

I never wore perfume, only regular home brand antiperspirant.

‘It makes me dizzy,’ he confessed. ‘It’s intoxicating.’

‘What do I smell like?’ I asked, rather flushed.

Mr. Stone licked his lips as though he could taste me in the air. ‘Sweet,’ he said.

My cheeks burned crimson, and I wished he would look at me. I couldn’t believe this was happening.

‘I want to kiss you so very badly, Rose,’ Mr. Stone said under his breath. ‘But I can’t … and it’s killing me.’

My heart hammered so loudly against my ribcage that I was sure Mr. Stone could hear it from where he sat.

Suddenly, I felt powerful. He wanted me … and it terrified him.

‘Mr. Stone,’ I breathed, but he still didn’t look at me. ‘Tom.’

A small groan escaped him as though his name leaving my lips was taboo.

‘Look at me,’ I said, my eyes fixated on him.

‘I can’t,’ he said, shaking his head.

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